{"id":5820,"date":"2011-08-02T13:20:00","date_gmt":"2011-08-02T13:20:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/?p=5820"},"modified":"2023-07-02T10:36:13","modified_gmt":"2023-07-02T10:36:13","slug":"yazilanlar-sizin-duygu-ve-dusunceleriniz","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/?p=5820","title":{"rendered":"Yaz\u0131lanlar Sizin Duygu ve D\u00fc\u015f\u00fcnceleriniz"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"has-medium-font-size\"><strong>Misbah Hicri\u2019ye Tarihsiz ve Talihsiz \u015eiirler kitab\u0131 ile ilgili g\u00f6nderdi\u011fim yaz\u0131<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>De\u011ferli dostum Misbah Hicri,<br>Merhaba. <strong>Tarihsiz ve Talihsiz \u015eiirle<\/strong>r\u2019in<sup>(1) <\/sup>t\u00fcm\u00fcn\u00fc okudum. G\u00fczel. Duygu ve d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcncelerini s\u00f6zc\u00fcklerle iyi ifade etmi\u015fsin. Kutlar\u0131m. \u015eiirlerin i\u00e7eri\u011fine y\u00f6nelik bir \u015fey s\u00f6yleme hakk\u0131n\u0131 kendimde g\u00f6rm\u00fcyorum. \u00c7\u00fcnk\u00fc yaz\u0131lanlar sizin duygu ve d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcnceleriniz. Ve kim bilir hangi duygu yo\u011funlu\u011funda ve neler d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcnerek o dizeleri olu\u015fturdunuz? Okuyan\u0131n alg\u0131s\u0131yla yazan\u0131n alg\u0131s\u0131 farkl\u0131 \u015feylerdir. Bu nedenle, sadece yaz\u0131m tekni\u011fi a\u00e7\u0131s\u0131ndan \u015fiirlerde g\u00f6rd\u00fc\u011f\u00fcm baz\u0131 eksiklikleri bildirmek istiyorum.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u015eiirlerde yaz\u0131m tekni\u011fi a\u00e7\u0131s\u0131ndan bir b\u00fct\u00fcnl\u00fck g\u00f6remedim. \u00d6rne\u011fin:<br>1. Baz\u0131 \u015fiirlerde noktalama i\u015fareti hi\u00e7 kullanmam\u0131\u015fs\u0131n. Bazen de hem kullanm\u0131\u015fs\u0131n hem kullanmam\u0131\u015fs\u0131n. Baz\u0131lar\u0131nda ise tam\u0131 tam\u0131na kullanm\u0131\u015fs\u0131n. Kar\u0131\u015f\u0131k bir vaziyet s\u00f6z konusu. \u00d6nerim: Dizelerin sonunda noktalama i\u015fareti kullanmasan daha iyi olur.<br>2. Ve yine \u015fiirlerin baz\u0131lar\u0131nda hi\u00e7 b\u00fcy\u00fck harf kullanmam\u0131\u015fs\u0131n. Dizlere k\u00fc\u00e7\u00fck harflerle ba\u015flay\u0131p, k\u00fc\u00e7\u00fck harflerle bitiyor. Baz\u0131lar\u0131nda dizeler b\u00fcy\u00fck harfle ba\u015flay\u0131p b\u00fcy\u00fck harfle bitiyor. Baz\u0131lar\u0131nda ise noktalama i\u015faretlerinde oldu\u011fu gibi kar\u0131\u015f\u0131k bir vaziyette, bazen dizeler k\u00fc\u00e7\u00fck harfle, bazen b\u00fcy\u00fck harfle ba\u015flam\u0131\u015f. \u00d6nerim: Kendine hem noktalamada, hem b\u00fcy\u00fck harf, k\u00fc\u00e7\u00fck harf olay\u0131nda bir \u00fcslup, tarz yarat; kendine \u00f6zg\u00fc bir sitilin olsun derim. Bana kal\u0131rsa hi\u00e7bir harfe ayr\u0131cal\u0131k tan\u0131ma, \u00f6zel isimler dahil t\u00fcm s\u00f6zc\u00fckleri (Haran, Dicle gibi..) k\u00fc\u00e7\u00fck harfle yaz.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Sevgili dostum,<br>Tekrar sizi kutluyorum, ba\u015far\u0131lar\u0131n\u0131n devam\u0131n\u0131 diliyorum.<br>Efsaneleri<sup>(2)<\/sup> hen\u00fcz okuyamad\u0131m. Okuyunca d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcncemi iletmeye \u00e7al\u0131\u015faca\u011f\u0131m.<br>Selam ve sevgiler.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>M\u00fcsl\u00fcm \u00dcz\u00fclmez<\/strong><br>02 A\u011fustos 2011<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-small-font-size\">&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;&#8212;<br><em>(1) Misbah Hicri, Tarihsiz ve Talihsiz \u015eiirler, Kent I\u015f\u0131klar\u0131 Yay\u0131nlar\u0131, \u0130stanbul, 2012, 158 sayfa.<br>(2) Misbah Hicri, Efsaneler ve Ger\u00e7ekler, Kent I\u015f\u0131klar\u0131 Yay\u0131nlar\u0131, \u0130stanbul, 2013, 392 sayfa.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em><strong>Not:<\/strong> Misbah Hicri, koronavir\u00fcs (Covid-19) salg\u0131n\u0131nda tedavi g\u00f6rd\u00fc\u011f\u00fc hastanede 27 Kas\u0131m 2020 g\u00fcn\u00fc hayat\u0131n\u0131 kaybetmi\u015ftir. Arkada\u015f\u0131m\u0131 sevgiyle an\u0131yorum. (11 Haziran 2023)<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n<div class=\"taxonomy-post_tag wp-block-post-terms\"><a href=\"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/?tag=efsaneler-ve-gercekler\" rel=\"tag\">efsaneler ve ger\u00e7ekler<\/a><span class=\"wp-block-post-terms__separator\">, <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/?tag=kent-isiklari-yayinlari\" rel=\"tag\">Kent I\u015f\u0131klar\u0131 Yay\u0131nlar\u0131<\/a><span class=\"wp-block-post-terms__separator\">, <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/?tag=misbah-hicri\" rel=\"tag\">misbah hicri<\/a><span class=\"wp-block-post-terms__separator\">, <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/?tag=siir\" rel=\"tag\">\u015fiir<\/a><span class=\"wp-block-post-terms__separator\">, <\/span><a href=\"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/?tag=tarihsiz-ve-talihsiz-siirler\" rel=\"tag\">Tarihsiz ve Talihsiz \u015eiirler<\/a><\/div>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Misbah Hicri\u2019ye Tarihsiz ve Talihsiz \u015eiirler kitab\u0131 ile ilgili g\u00f6nderdi\u011fim yaz\u0131 De\u011ferli dostum Misbah Hicri,Merhaba. Tarihsiz ve Talihsiz \u015eiirler\u2019in(1) t\u00fcm\u00fcn\u00fc okudum. G\u00fczel. Duygu ve d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcncelerini s\u00f6zc\u00fcklerle iyi ifade etmi\u015fsin. Kutlar\u0131m. \u015eiirlerin i\u00e7eri\u011fine y\u00f6nelik bir \u015fey s\u00f6yleme hakk\u0131n\u0131 kendimde g\u00f6rm\u00fcyorum. \u00c7\u00fcnk\u00fc yaz\u0131lanlar sizin duygu ve d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcnceleriniz. Ve kim bilir hangi duygu yo\u011funlu\u011funda ve neler d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcnerek o dizeleri olu\u015fturdunuz? Okuyan\u0131n alg\u0131s\u0131yla yazan\u0131n alg\u0131s\u0131 farkl\u0131 \u015feylerdir. Bu nedenle, sadece yaz\u0131m tekni\u011fi a\u00e7\u0131s\u0131ndan \u015fiirlerde g\u00f6rd\u00fc\u011f\u00fcm baz\u0131 eksiklikleri bildirmek istiyorum. \u015eiirlerde yaz\u0131m tekni\u011fi a\u00e7\u0131s\u0131ndan bir b\u00fct\u00fcnl\u00fck g\u00f6remedim. \u00d6rne\u011fin:1. Baz\u0131 \u015fiirlerde noktalama i\u015fareti hi\u00e7 kullanmam\u0131\u015fs\u0131n. Bazen de hem kullanm\u0131\u015fs\u0131n hem kullanmam\u0131\u015fs\u0131n. Baz\u0131lar\u0131nda ise tam\u0131 tam\u0131na kullanm\u0131\u015fs\u0131n.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[3403],"tags":[408,1938,403,116,2038],"class_list":["post-5820","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-plus","tag-efsaneler-ve-gercekler","tag-kent-isiklari-yayinlari","tag-misbah-hicri","tag-siir","tag-tarihsiz-ve-talihsiz-siirler"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5820","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=5820"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5820\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6773,"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5820\/revisions\/6773"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=5820"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=5820"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.uzulmez.site\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=5820"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}